Whisper by Kris P. Kreme
Max has no use for his brother Dominic, but his wife trusts there is good in everyone. So she doesn’t mind the jobless slob joining them for a convention hall speech downtown by the famed psychoanalyst Dr. Ezekiel Edison.
At the convention hall, Ezekiel Edison reveals to have discovered a unique pitch and intonation that when used in a whisper immediately affects the human mind. So Dominic begins constantly trying whispers over and over, wanting to find the right one.
When he somehow stumbles upon THE whisper, will Allison be able to do anything or will she find herself helplessly horny and willingly cheating right under her loving husband’s nose for most of the day and evening?
The absolute last person Max could ever want to be forced into dragging along with he and his wife for any event is his younger brother Dominic. The guy is a serious creep, a pervert, and considering he did just get out of jail for no matter how minor an infraction… a criminal in his mind.
Unfortunately for Max and fortunate for Dominic, his wife Allison is a lot more forgiving and generally trusting of everyone, always looking for the good side of anyone. And no matter how much Max tries to convince her on the drive to pick up Dominic from their parent’s house, there’s just no changing Allison’s mind that having Dominic come along to the downtown convention hall with them is a mistake.
Dominic was always the bratty brother who girls steered clear of growing up because he had that unkempt perverted attitude that only got worse and worse as he grew up… not that he ever actually grew up. But as they stop long enough for him to climb in, not even dressed nice for the event they are going to, there’s just no pushing past Allison’s insistence on giving everyone a chance.
While Max doesn’t like the obviously leering little looks Dominic gives his wife, having only just met her finally, Allison is too excited about the speaker they are going to hear at the convention hall to focus on brotherly bickering.
Having graduated with a degree in psychology, the speaker is Dr. Ezekiel Edison, one of the world’s most foremost psychoanalysts researching therapy and the brain, and his fame is known the world over. She’s nearly giddy about the fact he will be supposedly announcing substantial and history-making breakthroughs in altering addictive personalities through therapy and brain behavior modifications.
But all Max can think about is how Dominic keeps staring at his wife, even on the way into the convention hall staring right at her ass. And while Allison is aware of the attention, she merely teases her husband that she has a nice ass, and telling him to lighten up about the whole squabble.
But once they are seated in the darkened convention hall, Allison having to sit between the near-constantly bickering brothers, she may soon start to see what Max was talking about in calling his brother a creepy pervert.
When Ezekiel Edison reveals his biggest discovery in the field of brain and behavior therapy and modification, he shares that he has discovered a certain whisper… just the right volume, just the right intonation, that can near instantly change a patient’s thoughts. It can break through barriers they never knew possible, instantly offering a solution to the most troubled out there, addictions, struggles, depressions, all in the past once the whisper is applied.
And while he hasn’t had all that much interest in anything so far, Dominic definitely shows almost an obsessive interest in this supposed tone of whisper that can apparently control anyone. So for the rest of the time, every number of minutes, Dominic is leaning over to whisper something in Allison’s ear, trying different pitches of his whispered voice and various volumes, most of the attempts just silly things like asking if she is under his control, if this or that is the right tone of whisper, saying she is his now, and asking her to have some fun.
It’s nothing Allison can’t ignore and put up with even if her husband on the other side of her is getting pissed at all the whispered little comments his brother leans over to make. But just as they are about to get up and leave, the presentation by Dr. Ezekiel Edison over and everyone applauding, that is when somehow, some unlikely chance fluke… finds Dominic leaning over and whispering just the right tone, just the right pitch, exactly the right volume into Allison’s ear.
He whispers that she is horny, really really horny, and somehow her gasping expression makes it obvious that he finally, after relentless trying, stumbled upon the whisper.
But now that Dominic has a control any pervert always fantasized about having, how far is he really going to go with his older brother’s sexy wife? And how far will Allison find her own thoughts pushed into doing quite sneakily depraved things behind her loving husband’s back?
Hot Shots has something to tell the readers… just lean in and listen but if you find yourself hopelessly horny and grinning, it might be the story or it could be the Whisper.
Coming next… It’s too hot to wear that…
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